Jeg har skrevet en tekst til et nytt heavy metall band i oppstartfasen

[AnonymBruker]

Hva syntes dere? Holder det mål rent engelskfaglig?

She is the spell between the silver masters
She is the wind of the evil sky
Run from the dark of the unholy demon
Face the mystery from the virgin wolves

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

There is no dark of the virgin sky
There is no dark from the evil king
Run from the witch of the velvet master
She is the heart of the holy demon

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

I am the sky of the evil valley
Beware of the dark between the holy mountains, ROCK!
We come from the rain between the silver dreams
Face the wizard of the magic valley

SOLO 1

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

There is no wizard of the velvet lightning
Face the mountain between the holy rains, WHOA-OA!
Beware of the valley of the unholy dark
She is an evil pigeon eater in the lower left

SOLO 2

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

 

end.

Anonymkode: 50bf2...b9a

[AnonymBruker]

23 timer siden, AnonymBruker skrev:

Hva syntes dere? Holder det mål rent engelskfaglig?

She is the spell between the silver masters
She is the wind of the evil sky
Run from the dark of the unholy demon
Face the mystery from the virgin wolves

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

There is no dark of the virgin sky
There is no dark from the evil king
Run from the witch of the velvet master
She is the heart of the holy demon

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

I am the sky of the evil valley
Beware of the dark between the holy mountains, ROCK!
We come from the rain between the silver dreams
Face the wizard of the magic valley

SOLO 1

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

There is no wizard of the velvet lightning
Face the mountain between the holy rains, WHOA-OA!
Beware of the valley of the unholy dark
She is an evil pigeon eater in the lower left

SOLO 2

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

ROCK! There is no dark from the unholy rain
YEEAAAHHH! Run from the heart between the virgin wolves

 

end.

Anonymkode: 50bf2...b9a

Perfekt. Jeg blir til å bruke denne til mitt band -og tar creds for den. Takktakktakk!

Anonymkode: dad38...0cd

[AnonymBruker]

Du bør vel ha med litt shake  rock & roll for at låten skal bli perfect? 

Anonymkode: 56126...a10

[AnonymBruker]

Skriv metal, for helvete! 

Anonymkode: e2398...4cd

[Gruselgrafs]

På 8.5.2018 den 16.49, AnonymBruker skrev:

Hva syntes dere? Holder det mål rent engelskfaglig?

Anonymkode: 50bf2...b9a

Nei

Endret 11. mai 2018 av Gruselgrafs

[xx]

Hva betyr «pigeon eater in the lower left»?? 😂

[AnonymBruker]

Pigeon eater in the lower left 

Anonymkode: e6b89...124

[Daudaferd]

Eeeehm... Silver masters, unholy demon, holy demon, virgin wolves, velvet master, evil king, wizard of the magic valley og wizard of velvet lightning. 

Altså, greit at power metal har sine klisjeer, men dette blir faktisk litt for mye. Er du 13 år gammel?