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In a land, far far away, prince dreamy where living in a castle with his sister. This prince where known to melt every woman’s heart, just with a look. every day he would get letters from women (and some men to) all over the kingdom, with the magical question "will you merry me?" these letters came inn bags 100 a time, so the prince stop reading them. 
Prince dreamy where not a bad man, he did not lead on any girls, neither did he play any game with theme, he where simply him self, polite, well spoken, good looking, kind eyes, and a gentle man to every girl or lady he where associated with. even the girls who had petard the prince trust, got easily of the hook, with out any dramatic consecvenses,

One day, as the prince where finishing he´s knight training, princess beauty came to him with a suggestion "my dear brother, if you seek a woman, who will catch you heart, and keep it, with no other intention then to keep it safe and beating, ask this woman to come" "my dearest sister, you suggestion is not bad, but if I ask a woman to come, she will come, no mather what here intension is" the princess smiled, and gave here brother a roll of paper and pen "wright this: my dearest, you have found this letters, because destiny wants us to meet." "and now i just throw it out the window, and hope that the girl who catches it first is the right one?" "ha ha" the princess laughter where heart warming, "no my silly brother, of course not, that would bring a whole parade at our door, you must leave this note with one of the guards, send him out to you favorite place both day and night, tell him to leave the note on this place where only the person who looks the same place that you do, will find it" prince dreamy looked at her, "sir, she might be you sister, and a hopeless romantic teenager, who spend to many hours reading books about love and silly girl thing, but this idea might not be so stupid to try, who know it might bring you back a deer, or it might bring back a girl with the right sparkle in here eye" one of the servant said.

Prince dreamy took the note, sealed it, gave it to one of his most trusted guards and sent him off. With the order to watch the note from the distance, and bring back the first girl who find the letter.

the hours went by, day light became night, just to return to day again. princess beauty came in to the prince chamber "my apologies brother, I have let you down, with giving you a task that would only work in the books, i should not had given you an idea this romantically silly" prince dreamy looked out of his window while he answered "for an silly romantically idea to work, you need to go all in, we cant say for sure that this idea was no success before my guard comes in the gate empty handed, now lets go out and enjoy the sunset, its not a cloud in sight, it might be starlit tonight"

At midnight the prince where called out on the balcony "my lord, this is the one" the guard said. prince dreamy walked out, nearly tripping of excitement, "good evening to you miss, can i invite you in for a warm drink and some food? you must have had a long an unprepared walk all the way up here" the girl turned around, in the moon light se look almost paled, and so innocent. the girl nodded, and reach for the prince`s arm. he led her in the fire place lounge and offered here to sit in one of the cheer’s, instead she sat down at the floor in front of the fireplaces. "are you cold miss?" one of the servant asked "no sir, I just like to enjoy the natures fire up close, and not from a cheer" the prince looked at his servant and his friendly guard with a question mark in his face. not sure what to do or say the prince slowly sat down with the girl and asked her here name "marabella" she answered, the prince looked at here, in the light of the fire she looked reddish in her skin tone, the hair had color shade of blond and brown, she was dressed as she where used to go in the mountains. but her eyes, he still hadn’t seen here eyes it was like she where hiding theme.

the servant came in with some warm drink, and light evening food she placed the trey just behind theme, turned around a gave a signal to the other servant and the guard, to leave the room with here.

"marabella" the prince spoke "you look like you are from the mountain, where is your home place?"

marabella kept stearin in to the fire while she answered "i live just down in the city, but i like to hike in the mountains" "aha" the prince answered "so did you go hiking today? where the any reason for why you where in the mountains today?" marabella looked up and stared the prince straight in the eyes "I choose to go in the mountain to day because of the weather, where I found you letter ´, is the perfect place to sit and look about in the oceans, the ice lands around makes a beautiful silluets in the sunset, and sense the where no clouds in the sky’s to night, it would be the perfect place to see the starlit, as well as the moonlight would had given me a beautiful walk back home" marabellas eyes sparkled as she told the story. prince dreamy where speechless, could this be? is it really happening? had the guard hide the note where he was told, or had he just laid it on top of the rock. marabella saw the prince where thinking "as for you letter, it was a little cheesy, do you read many romantic novels? or did you just let one of you servant do all the thinking?" prince dreamy where a little choked, never before had a girl, or any person for that mather, spoken to him like an equal, or doubted that it was his idea. "well, to be honest my sister where the one who came on this idea, she read allot of romantic books and novels. but I did go for this idea, doesn’t that make me a little romantic?" marabella smiled, "yes you do get romantic points for going with this idea, but who’s idea was it to hide the letter between the pyramid rocks? no one would look there unless they know about it" the prince smiled "now that was my idea, that views point is one of my favorite places, my father used to take me there as an child, he would tell me story’s about the pyramid rocks, while we waited for the sunset" now prince dreamy and marabella just looked at each other, no one said a word, the fire made sparkling noises, the min lighted up outside the castle, and a meteor shower appeared. "make a wish" marabella said smiling prince dreamy closed his eyes, and wished. Marabella kissed him on the cheek and said, "if we have the same wish, we will be standing by the pyramid rocks one day, and enjoying the sunset and the starlit, as you tell story of the pyramid rocks" when the prince opened his eyes to answer, marabella where gone. "guard" the prince screamed they came running "where is she where is the girl?" one of theme answered "she’s gone my lord, she walked out smiling and glowing like an newlywed bride" the prince turned around to walk back in to the fire lounge "you majesty, she left a note for me to give you" the prince folded it out and read it to him self I believe in destiny.

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[Siri 87]

In a land, far far away, prince dreamy where living in a castle with his sister. This prince where known to melt every woman’s heart, just with a look. every day he would get letters from women (and some men to) all over the kingdom, with the magical question "will you merry me?" these letters came inn bags 100 a time, so the prince stop reading them. 
Prince dreamy where not a bad man, he did not lead on any girls, neither did he play any game with theme, he where simply him self, polite, well spoken, good looking, kind eyes, and a gentle man to every girl or lady he where associated with. even the girls who had petard the prince trust, got easily of the hook, with out any dramatic consecvenses,

One day, as the prince where finishing he´s knight training, princess beauty came to him with a suggestion "my dear brother, if you seek a woman, who will catch you heart, and keep it, with no other intention then to keep it safe and beating, ask this woman to come" "my dearest sister, you suggestion is not bad, but if I ask a woman to come, she will come, no mather what here intension is" the princess smiled, and gave here brother a roll of paper and pen "wright this: my dearest, you have found this letters, because destiny wants us to meet." "and now i just throw it out the window, and hope that the girl who catches it first is the right one?" "ha ha" the princess laughter where heart warming, "no my silly brother, of course not, that would bring a whole parade at our door, you must leave this note with one of the guards, send him out to you favorite place both day and night, tell him to leave the note on this place where only the person who looks the same place that you do, will find it" prince dreamy looked at her, "sir, she might be you sister, and a hopeless romantic teenager, who spend to many hours reading books about love and silly girl thing, but this idea might not be so stupid to try, who know it might bring you back a deer, or it might bring back a girl with the right sparkle in here eye" one of the servant said.

Prince dreamy took the note, sealed it, gave it to one of his most trusted guards and sent him off. With the order to watch the note from the distance, and bring back the first girl who find the letter.

the hours went by, day light became night, just to return to day again. princess beauty came in to the prince chamber "my apologies brother, I have let you down, with giving you a task that would only work in the books, i should not had given you an idea this romantically silly" prince dreamy looked out of his window while he answered "for an silly romantically idea to work, you need to go all in, we cant say for sure that this idea was no success before my guard comes in the gate empty handed, now lets go out and enjoy the sunset, its not a cloud in sight, it might be starlit tonight"

At midnight the prince where called out on the balcony "my lord, this is the one" the guard said. prince dreamy walked out, nearly tripping of excitement, "good evening to you miss, can i invite you in for a warm drink and some food? you must have had a long an unprepared walk all the way up here" the girl turned around, in the moon light se look almost paled, and so innocent. the girl nodded, and reach for the prince`s arm. he led her in the fire place lounge and offered here to sit in one of the cheer’s, instead she sat down at the floor in front of the fireplaces. "are you cold miss?" one of the servant asked "no sir, I just like to enjoy the natures fire up close, and not from a cheer" the prince looked at his servant and his friendly guard with a question mark in his face. not sure what to do or say the prince slowly sat down with the girl and asked her here name "marabella" she answered, the prince looked at here, in the light of the fire she looked reddish in her skin tone, the hair had color shade of blond and brown, she was dressed as she where used to go in the mountains. but her eyes, he still hadn’t seen here eyes it was like she where hiding theme.

the servant came in with some warm drink, and light evening food she placed the trey just behind theme, turned around a gave a signal to the other servant and the guard, to leave the room with here.

"marabella" the prince spoke "you look like you are from the mountain, where is your home place?"

marabella kept stearin in to the fire while she answered "i live just down in the city, but i like to hike in the mountains" "aha" the prince answered "so did you go hiking today? where the any reason for why you where in the mountains today?" marabella looked up and stared the prince straight in the eyes "I choose to go in the mountain to day because of the weather, where I found you letter ´, is the perfect place to sit and look about in the oceans, the ice lands around makes a beautiful silluets in the sunset, and sense the where no clouds in the sky’s to night, it would be the perfect place to see the starlit, as well as the moonlight would had given me a beautiful walk back home" marabellas eyes sparkled as she told the story. prince dreamy where speechless, could this be? is it really happening? had the guard hide the note where he was told, or had he just laid it on top of the rock. marabella saw the prince where thinking "as for you letter, it was a little cheesy, do you read many romantic novels? or did you just let one of you servant do all the thinking?" prince dreamy where a little choked, never before had a girl, or any person for that mather, spoken to him like an equal, or doubted that it was his idea. "well, to be honest my sister where the one who came on this idea, she read allot of romantic books and novels. but I did go for this idea, doesn’t that make me a little romantic?" marabella smiled, "yes you do get romantic points for going with this idea, but who’s idea was it to hide the letter between the pyramid rocks? no one would look there unless they know about it" the prince smiled "now that was my idea, that views point is one of my favorite places, my father used to take me there as an child, he would tell me story’s about the pyramid rocks, while we waited for the sunset" now prince dreamy and marabella just looked at each other, no one said a word, the fire made sparkling noises, the min lighted up outside the castle, and a meteor shower appeared. "make a wish" marabella said smiling prince dreamy closed his eyes, and wished. Marabella kissed him on the cheek and said, "if we have the same wish, we will be standing by the pyramid rocks one day, and enjoying the sunset and the starlit, as you tell story of the pyramid rocks" when the prince opened his eyes to answer, marabella where gone. "guard" the prince screamed they came running "where is she where is the girl?" one of theme answered "she’s gone my lord, she walked out smiling and glowing like an newlywed bride" the prince turned around to walk back in to the fire lounge "you majesty, she left a note for me to give you" the prince folded it out and read it to him self I believe in destiny.

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