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This takes place years before the searing of Ascalon.

I had grown up my first 18 years in Kamadan as the only daughter of a wealthy sunspear Dervish named Imothep and a ascalonian princess named Arissa(Aunt sister of king Adelbern . My father died when I was 18 so we moved to ascalon so my mother could start over again.

One day I was out in the forrest training my new petwolf Rabies, I suddenly saw a pack of Grawls heading towards me, I got angry and shot down five of them, suddenly an arrow hit my leg and i fell to the ground injured, then a new arrow struck my shoulder from behind, and pinned me to the ground, suddenly I heard a voice and with blurred wiev I saw a silhouette of a man in blue clothes shooting down grawls, before everything went dark.

When I woke up I was laying on a blue cloak , and a young man with dark long hair and a sweet beard was sitting next to me, and my pet were licking my face and whimpered in joy.

I asked him what happen, and he told what had happend and asked what my name was, I told him that my name was Thyra Mckinnon, he introduced himself as Aidan the ranger. I smiled weakly and went down again, when I woke up again I was laying in his arms , while he carried me to my mothers house. My mother screamed when she saw me and put me to my bed, the next week I fought for my life cause I had got a wound infection. I had feverish dreams about the death of my father and other nasty stuff.

When I finally recovered , did I feel weak and tired, but my strenght came back after some potions made by my mother.

The next days I was walking round in the forrest hunting rabbits to my mother's famous rabbit pie. Suddenly someone called my name, and I saw the ranger that had saved my life, he came walking towards me, I felt a strange sensation in me, so I hugged him and thanked him for saving my life.

The next days we were hunting together and having a good time together, I often brought with me homemade stuff to lunch, while we were sitting under a tree enjoying our lunchbreak, he suddenly gave me a long and sweet kiss at my lips, and asked if I wanted to be his girl. I said "yes", cause he had haunted my dreams since he rescued me. We did move together and lived happily for many years and had a daughter named Ceylion. But during the searing me and our teenage daughter were separated from him,we fled to my family in Kamadan , where I found out my mother had survived, now I live with my mother and daughter with my family . Im still looking for my beloved Aidan who did dissapear after the searing. Rumors told me he and some other Ascalon heroes have arrived at Consulate docks.....

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AnonymBruker
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Skjønner ikke helt dette innlegget, jeg - er det noe du har skrevet som du vil ha tilbakemelding på?

(Og hvorfor på engelsk ?)

Anonym poster: a887c5fcaadfe897fb95c3a675904f2f

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Det var postet på et forum for engelskspråklige GW fans;:)

Ville bare ha tilbakemelding om jeg brude fortsette storyen:) og oversette den til norsk!

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Du fortsetter dersom du selv finner glede i å skrive.

Kanskje du heller bør spørre folka på det andre forumet hva de synes? Jeg for min del klarer meg godt uten en fortsettelse, men nå er ikke jeg en GW-fan heller.

Språket flyter ikke spesielt godt og det er en del feil, så en norsk oversettelse kunne sikkert vært greit for de av oss som ønsker å lese.

Anonym poster: 11ae785b1bf70a7de7deedd371972885

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